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December 6th, 2004 (03:55 pm)
This is a rewritten scene from my NaNovel, rewritten on purpose to include David, who wasn't around enough in draft 1 (currently halfway through draft 2 at the moment). Does it work? What do I need to change? PLEASE tell me. =)
( Read it pleeeease! )
